Author David J. Fortier

Journal of a New Guy

Thoughts of a Recently Published Writer, plus food and cycling.

I Don't Have Time, I Make Time.
Author David J. Fortier
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Lately, the day job has left me with waxing and waning (mostly the latter) motivation and energy in the evenings. I can't let that keep me from penning the next modest Canadian novel. If I let the day go, hoping to write, it won't happen. I used to tell people I didn't wait for inspiration, quoting Peter DeVries, "I only write when I'm inspired, and I make sure I'm inspired every morning at 9am." Like I didn't wait for inspiration, I shouldn't wait for motivation.

And like a running picture I recently posted to Facebook, I can't wait until I have time, I have to make time.

Thus, I'm booking time in my schedule for writing (and exercise). It's the only way to get them done.

How do you get your writing time in? What's your plan? How do you follow? Do you get treats for writing?

Cheers,
NGD

Writing: Rules, Principles, and Form
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Robert McKee packs a metric ton of great advice into the first paragraph of "Story: Substance, Structure, Style, and the Principles of Screenwriting." Here's the text:

Story is about principles, not rules.
A rule says, "You must do it this way." A principle says, "This works... and has through all remembered time." The difference is crucial. your work needn't be modeled after a "well-made" play; rather, it must be well made within the principles that shape our art. Anxious, inexperienced writers obey rules. Rebellious, unschooled writers break rules. Artists master the form.


Now, this sounds great at first, a true epiphany for me. However, after giving it some thought, it would have meant nothing when I first started writing. Anxious, inexperienced writers don't know the rules, so they have no idea if they they're following them. Somebody has to tell them what the rules are before then can decide to follow them or not. Regardless of what they choose, they need that first learning stage.

While I don't disagree with the last line, nor the crux of what McKee is trying to say in is opening paragraph, that the inexperienced follow or break rules and the experienced master form, it isn't fair. People don't learn in a vacuum. You can't become experienced and master form without first learning about the rules and principles. Only then, can you master the form.

Having learned a few rules over the years and maybe a principle or two, I'm ready to work on my form. This book comes highly recommended from various sources, so I'm excited.

Cheers,
NGD

Nominated for an Award
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Marlene Dotterrer was kind enough to nominate me on her blog for either the Sunshine Award or the Versatile Blogger.

I’m not much for sunshine, except if it’s lighting up the battlefield or glinting off a blade, so I’ll choose the Versatile Blogger. After all, I also blog about food, cycling, and writing at NewGuyDave and it’s not easy to blog about movies, comics, and games. Especially when moving from one country to another and starting a new job. Of course, that explains why I haven’t posted in a while (at either site). But have no fear, I’m on it. And though I have no TV yet, I have Netflix and a few graphic novels that made the trip.

Now, I’m supposed to tell you things you don’t know about me. For most of you, this should be new.

1) For all the cool “foody-guy” recipes I post on LiveJournal, I love sandwiches. Rye bread, tomatoes, cheese, lunchmeat, mustard and a bit of mayo.

2) By the time I was five years old I’d gone to the hospital for stitches three times (or maybe four). Between the age 34 and 36 I went twice more.

3) The first time I fought in an SCA open field battle, I rushed out of the shield wall and was the first to die. It really is safer in numbers.

4) I’m not all action and adventure. I used to write bleeding-heart romantic poetry while listening to rock ballads.

5) I drink out of a skull mug most days.

That should be enough.

Now, there are some great blogs out there, like Magical Words and Fantasy Faction but I know some others you might not know. Therefore, I nominate…

Scott Oden – Who blogs about some great historical stuff, literature, and other cool things at The Wine-Dark Seas.

Lauren Harris – Over at Ink-Stained Scribe, Lauren hits on a lot of great writing-related posts. Of particular note, planning time to write, something I’ve had trouble with now that I’ve a day job.

Joshua Palmatier – I know, I know, he’s my mentor and a friend. But seriously, over at his LiveJournal he reviews a ton of books, he offers great advice on writing, and there’s pictures of gardens and guinea pigs. What’s not to like?

Well, there you have it. Thanks to whomever started this, it was fun.

Mirrored from Action Adventure Fantasy.

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My Pad Thai
Author David J. Fortier
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Ingredients:
2 chicken breasts or 2 cups of shrimp (I like cooked shrimp because you can just throw them in at the end)
3-4 green onions, chopped
1/2 cup of egg whites
16 oz bag of bean sprouts
12 oz bag of broccoli slaw or rainbow salad (shredded veggies)
1 cup of tofu noodles or cooked egg noodles
Kikkomon Pad Thai powder or VH Pad Thai sauce
1/4 cup of peanut butter (or FitNutz)
2 tbsp of unsalted peanuts (no shells)

Pre-Cooking Prep:
Thaw chicken

Cooking:
Cube chicken or cut into thin slices and cook in separate pan.
In an oiled or non-stick wok or large pan, cook egg whites and green onions. When the egg whites are almost done, pour in broccoli slaw and bean sprouts. Stir these until they soften. Then add the noodles, spices/sauce, peanut butter, cooked chicken/shrimp. If you opt to go with uncooked shrimp, you'll want them in there when the sprouts and slaw are a little soft. Shrimp don't take long to cook, but need to be near the heat, so get them underneath. When everything is mixed in, add more spice or peanut butter to taste and garnish with a sprinkling of peanuts.
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I am Published!
Author David J. Fortier
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Begin shameless self-promotion:

While most of the world was going about Monday like every other, today I received payment for my first sale AND it came out in print. "Blalan's Game" is a short story (about four pages) and is published in April's Bards and Sages Quarterly.

You can get a FREE PDF of the Quarterly by signing up for the Bards and Sages Newsletter. (Here)
or
If you prefer Kindle, there's a version for purchase on Amazon (last seen at $2.99 for 80 pages). (Here)

Have to go finish taxes. But I'll be back.

Enjoy,
NewGuyDave

PS I changed my byline (thanks Marlene for the reminder).

Crossing the Streams Contest Winner: NewGuyDave
Author David J. Fortier
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As per Ari Marmell's [info]mouseferatu email and March 8th LJ post.

"So all the authors involved in the Crossing the Streams contest pooled our entrants, and our single super-winner has been determined.

Congratulations, David J. Fortier! You win a signed book from each and every participating author! :-D

Dave won, for those who are interested in such details, via his entry to Jon Sprunk’s portion of the contest. Jon and Pyr Books have just released the third book in his Shadows trilogy, so go check him out. He’s worth reading.

Thank you, again, to everyone who entered. You made this whole experiment a blast, and we’re almost certain to be doing this again at some point in the not too distant future.

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My initial reaction was that Ari was pulling my leg at the request of a friend. But after I realized the email was legit.

Seriously... This is fracking awesome!! I can't believe it. Woohoo!!
*does happy dance, trying not to break anything* Honestly, I was
really disappointed that I didn't win any of the individual contests,
but this more than makes up for a few days of glum. Thanks!

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And thus I chose books (when a choice was available):

Conqueror's Shadow by Ari Marmell
Black Chalice by Steven Savile
Daggerspell and Darkspell (paired) by Katherine Kerr
The Birth of the Dread Remora by Aaron Rosenberg
Queen of Stone by Keith Baker
Shadow's Son by Jon Sprunk
Bloodforged by Nathan Long
Hounded by Kevin Hearne
Beauty Has Her Way anthology from Joshua Palmatier
Carpathia by Matt Forebeck
Legacy of Wolves by Marsheila (Marcy) Rockwell
King of RPGs Vol 1 by Jason Bradley Thompson
The Desert of Souls by Howard Andrew Jones
Star Wars - The Old Republic: Deceived by Paul S. Kemp
Returning My Sister's Face by Eugie Foster
Lion of Cairo by Scott Oden
Honor Among Thieves by Elaine Cunningham
Downshadow Erik Scott de Bie

Honestly, this list is dark and dangerous. I love it. There's more
than one tale of thieves or assassins, a few about characters who need
redemption, and throughout the promise of a whole lot of action and
adventure. Awesome!

And now I expect little brown packages to start filling the mailbox and between the doors...

Cheers,
NGD
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Text Galleys
Author David J. Fortier
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This week calls for good news.

Usually, when I hear about authors proofing text galleys for novels or stories I get a little envious. I suppose it's only natural since it's the final stage the author touches the story before it heads off to publication (unless self-publishing). For years now, I've been happy to call myself a writer, but the published part has oft eluded me.

Now I've taken another step forward. I'm happy to say that I've received and will be sending back today, my first text galley. I've re-read and made minor notes for Blalan's Game, which will be published in Bards and Sages Quarterly in April.

With much excitement, I will no longer be a pre-published author, so I guess I'll just drop the 'pre-' from my LJ byline.

*happy dance*

What good news have you to share?

Cheers,
Dave

How fast do you read?
Author David J. Fortier
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It is nice to be above the national average (I assume this is US), though 7% is not much to cheer about.

Honestly, I think I used to read faster as a teen-ager, specifically pre-football years. I know I have suffered at least three concussions while playing, two of which resulted in short-term memory loss of about 1 hour.

Sometimes I struggle to concentrate if the text is not engaging, and I don't mean action, I just mean well-written. Of course, that might be a reader preference.

How did you score? Any surprises?

Cheers,
Dave

Limitless (2011) “Boundless Agony”
Author David J. Fortier
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Limitless knows no bounds. And not in a good way. Not only is this movie basically a long wish-fulfillment fantasy with little or no reason to invest in the main character, but the MC makes the stupidest decisions for a guy with limitless brain power.

Synopsis:

With his writing career dragging and his girlfriend casting him off, Eddie Morra’s life turns around when he takes a drug that provides astonishing mental focus — but its deadly side effects threaten his future. – Netflix
(Staring Bradley coooper and Robert De Niro.)

(SPOILERS follow)

Despicable He

The first problem is that down-on-his-luck writer Eddie Morra is hard to relate to because he’s doing nothing to help his situation. He’s not even a struggling writer because he doesn’t spend any time writing. And he’s not written one word. Sorry, bouncing a basketball off the wall isn’t writing. He’s a wannabe, but I digress. No empathy here for his girlfriend leaving.

Later in the film, when he has incredible intellectual capacity, he’s also not somebody you can connect to because now he has it all. He’s a Garry Stu or Larry Stu, or whatever, because he has fame and fortune, screws hot women at parties, and flies off to exotic locals with is new social life.

Sure he faces side effects, headaches and blackouts, and learns he could die if he keeps taking the drug. But given that the drug is a form of cheating to win, who cares. Also, he’s given the information and told he needs to stop, but he doesn’t. So why worry about the side effects. Worse, there’s not even any internal conflict with whether he should stop or not. He goes straight back to the drugs after hearing the bad news. But he scales back… right.

Pot Holes or Plot Holes

When on the “magic drug” Eddie has the world at his mercy, he’s able to recall anything and everything he’s ever read, watched, or heard. With amazing clarity of mind, he’s able to recall things most people couldn’t remember. So why then does he go home to review important business material when there isn’t any drugs left at his place? This has huge ramifications on the story and completely conflicts with the effects of the drug. Seriously, on the drug he’s a genius, but can’t count. Better yet he can’t remember that he left his magic stash elsewhere? I’m not limitless, and I know when I’ve run out of bananas.

Also, later when his precious stash of drugs are hidden in his jacket, he takes the jacket off and gives to, of all people, his new lawyer, who also works for his competition. Really? He can figure out with precision that his competition has bribed their way into an industry because but somehow he has not read, heard, or watched anything which shows the competition’s lawyer? Hard to believe.

Humility, Honor, or Even Remotely Redeemable? Nope.

After a laughable (but not in a good way) final confrontation with some thugs, Eddie overcomes the threat from the Robert De Niro’s character with such arrogance that I actually wanted to hit him. It’s not clear if he’s on the drug without side effects or if has had permanent improvements to his brain from the drug. But he wins because he’s “50 steps ahead of you and everybody else.”

There’s nothing good, honorable, or redeemable about this character. He gets rich and powerful from taking drugs and does nothing good with his power or wealth.

Cheat and take short cuts to win. Good message.

Now, if only the writers had taken some of this drug to keep the story facts straight, make this plot believable, and come up with a character that’s worthy of watching.

What have you watched lately? Anything of note, good or bad?

Cheers,
Dave

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Post-Con Excitement
Author David J. Fortier
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First off, the train-ride out to Boston was a great opportunity for writing and critiquing. Amtrak's wifi meant I could post the results of my critique right away and not have to worry that it would come down. I also ended my subscription from the OWW yahoo group, in part to maximize the writing time (and cut down on emails and stress).

Friday at the con was mostly meet and greet with friends: Joshua Palmatier, ([info]jpsorrow), Patricia Bray ([info]pbray), SC Butler, Ian Tregillis, Melinda Snodgrass, Myke Cole, and Peter V.Brett. It was also an opportunity to reacquaint with people and meet new ones, in particular agent Michael Kabongo and artist Daniel Dos Santos. I listened to a panel discussion about John Carter and Edgar Rice Burrough. This was okay, but having not read this particular set of Burroughs stories, I didn't connect with the topic. The art show was fantastic, though I didn't buy anything this year.

**highlight** I guessed that H. Rider Haggard was the first author to use an eclipse as a plot element (character knows of its knowledge before hand and tricks the locals). We sort of confirmed this with Google, but I could be wrong. Still, minor victory.

Saturday's first panel was Creating Alien Characters. Frank Wu had some excellent ideas and brought picture books of sci-fi aliens and creatures from nature. I took a lot of notes during this panel as there was much there that I want to remember when creating my alien races for the space fantasy epic. After the panel, I sat in on two meet-and-greet sessions with authors Peter V. Brett and Myke Cole. This was a great chance to hear about their writing processes and ask questions about their publishing experiences.

I missed some of the afternoon panel discussions I'd planned on attending, but that was fine because instead I chatted with Jennifer Pelland and Elizabeth Bear. Much of the rest of Saturday was socializing with other writers, including Bryce Moore who told me about his upcoming book Vodnik. Myke Cole introduced me to a bunch more people, whose names I wish I could remember. Genevieve Eldredge thankfully passed me a business card, which I wish everybody carried.

Sunday, I attended a reading and autograph session. That morning, I also had an interesting opportunity arise thanks to Chuck Gannon. I'll provide more information as I can.

After all that socializing and talking-shop you might expect a guy to be exhausted, and well, I am a little drained physically. But after spending that much time with folks of the publishing world, I'm also pretty excited to work on my stories.

So did you do anything fun this weekend?

Cheers,
Dave

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